Unmentioned might of a women
This article was written
by a men called Zoeleo giving us his perspective views about how women are
defined by men, how women are forced to rise above being a women and their
important role in a men’s world. he says that women partake in the tasks that
make society function yet they still receive less recognition and . Nevertheless he inspires women to go after their
goals, desires and dreams. He states that women are tough, indestructible to
challenges and are more prone to talk about what they are thinking, feeling and
are able to demonstrate their emotions where else men tend to process their
emotions inwardly because they are afraid of them and want to protect themselves. The writer seems to be appreciating women for being adherent as prevented to being dominate. He states that women are not celebrated enough instead they should be celebrated everyday due to the value they add unto the men's live, society and for being biddable to the patriarchal system or practice.
It is useful
occasionally to look at the past to gain a perspective on the present. What
women and men have come to mean at the present time is our definition of
society and the most fascinating thing about today’s society is that it does
not promote inequality but rather equality. The writer describes men as people
who are unable to deal with their emotions, people who find it hard to process
their emotions and express them because they will be considered weak, instead
of dealing with them they bottled them with alcohol and hide them until they
cloud their judgments. According to my knowledge and understanding each person
brings who they are including their masculinity and femininity so it
is equally true that men express their emotions differently than women. They tend
to work out their emotions by finding solutions and doing things, so they are
not ill-mannered as stated. I was somehow infuriated by some of the things the writer said and do not agree with the writer’s portrayal about
men in the article.
Effective writing
allows the reader to thoroughly understand what the writer is saying which
means the message should be effectively communicated and the content should be
powerful. After spending countless hours perusing this article I find the
writer’s style effective, meaning the use of words, phrases and sentences
communicate the writer’s ideas and facts clearly. This type of style is
effective enough to keep a reader’s interests and attention. According to Kathleen
Cali (www.learnnc.org/lp/editions/few/684)
A writer’s style is what sets his or her writing apart and makes it unique.
Style is the way writing is dressed up (or down) to fit the specific context,
purpose, or audience. Word choice, sentence fluency, and the writer’s voice. A lot must be done for women to be recognize in the society we live in.
