Tuesday, 30 August 2016

Unmentioned might of a women
This article was written by a men called Zoeleo giving us his perspective views about how women are defined by men, how women are forced to rise above being a women and their important role in a men’s world. he says that women partake in the tasks that make society function yet they still receive less recognition and . Nevertheless he inspires women to go after their goals, desires and dreams. He states that women are tough, indestructible to challenges and are more prone to talk about what they are thinking, feeling and are able to demonstrate their emotions where else men tend to process their emotions inwardly because they are afraid of them and want to protect themselves. The writer seems to be appreciating women for being adherent as prevented to being dominate. He states that women are not celebrated enough instead they should be celebrated everyday due to the value they add unto the men's live, society and for being biddable  to the patriarchal system or practice.
It is useful occasionally to look at the past to gain a perspective on the present. What women and men have come to mean at the present time is our definition of society and the most fascinating thing about today’s society is that it does not promote inequality but rather equality. The writer describes men as people who are unable to deal with their emotions, people who find it hard to process their emotions and express them because they will be considered weak, instead of dealing with them they bottled them with alcohol and hide them until they cloud their judgments. According to my knowledge and understanding each person brings who they are including their masculinity and femininity so it is equally true that men express their emotions differently than women. They tend to work out their emotions by finding solutions and doing things, so they are not ill-mannered as stated. I was somehow infuriated by some of the things the writer said and do not agree with the writer’s portrayal about men in the article.

Effective writing allows the reader to thoroughly understand what the writer is saying which means the message should be effectively communicated and the content should be powerful. After spending countless hours perusing this article I find the writer’s style effective, meaning the use of words, phrases and sentences communicate the writer’s ideas and facts clearly. This type of style is effective enough to keep a reader’s interests and attention. According to Kathleen Cali (www.learnnc.org/lp/editions/few/684) A writer’s style is what sets his or her writing apart and makes it unique. Style is the way writing is dressed up (or down) to fit the specific context, purpose, or audience. Word choice, sentence fluency, and the writer’s voice. A lot must be done for women to be recognize in the society we live in.

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